Re: Draft algorithms specification

Dominik,

Thank you for incorporating my feedback into an updated PR, and thank for
improving the xrefs situation.  I made some comments on the PR which are
mostly minor.  I agree it makes sense to land this PR and edit on top of it.


On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 6:26 AM, Rottsches, Dominik <
dominik.rottsches@intel.com> wrote:

> Hi Mark, Francois,
>
> On Thu, 2015-01-08 at 18:45 -0800, mark a. foltz wrote:
> > Francois, thank you for the detailed feedback.  Responses inline, and
> > I will craft a PR with some edits shortly.
>
>
> I updated the pull request here:
> https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api/pull/38
>
> @Mark: It would make editing nicely easy if you could base additional
> PRs or edits on top of this one, if it looks okay to you.
>
> The PR contains the following changes:
>
> * Rebased on top of w3c/presentation-api
> * Added terminology items and references to respective external specs,
> highlighted usage of these terms in the algorithms section.
> * Added a step in the Start Session section to bring up a browsing
> context and display the page on the presentation display.
> * Rephrased and compacted availability monitoring section, trying to
> incorporate Mark's and and Francois' suggestions.
> * Added step to trigger availability monitoring in the Start Session
> algorithm
>
> @Mark & Francois: Could you review this and see whether it captures both
> of your suggestions? Maybe we can merge this PR to master and continue
> the editing on top of that?
>
> I did not incorporate parts your discussion regarding
> "7.5 Join Session" and comments following below, especially with regards
> to joining one out of set of existing sessions. Perhaps we can handle
> these as separate PR's.
>
> Thanks, I am happy about the progress we're making,
>
> Dominik
>

Received on Friday, 9 January 2015 19:37:56 UTC