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RE: some comments on editor's draft

From: Li Li <Li.NJ.Li@huawei.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2012 15:10:44 +0000
To: "public-webrtc@w3.org" <public-webrtc@w3.org>
Message-ID: <B60F8F444AAC9C49A9EF0D12D05E0942216ACA06@szxeml535-mbx.china.huawei.com>
Dear editors,

As we were reading the editor's draft [1], we made notes on 58 comments/suggestions about the organization and presentation of the spec (as well as grammatical and spelling errors). A copy of a noted spec draft is included for your information.

Some suggestions are:

*         We need to clarify the scope of the API better.

*         A terminology section could be added to make the terms consistent in the spec.

*         A top-down presentation style for all the interfaces would be easier to follow than current mixed styles.

*         Add a section for Security Considerations

The detail comments can be found at [2] - it seems the mailing list does not accept HTML attachment so we tried the Google site instead.

Thanks for your consideration.

Li Li, Wu Chou

[1] http://dev.w3.org/2011/webrtc/editor/webrtc.html
[2] https://sites.google.com/site/rtcwebshare/webrtc10_comments
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