Re: Input needed: US Federal Reserve Payments Position Paper

On 7 December 2013 22:52, Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> The Web Payments group is submitting a position paper to the US Federal
> Reserve on the work we're doing here, inviting them to join this group
> or have us advise their work. Ultimately, the goal of the paper is to
> get a dialogue going between the Fed and this group.
>
> The first very rough draft is here, it still needs a good bit of polishing:
>
> http://www.w3.org/community/webpayments/wiki/FedPaymentsPositionPaper
>

+1 great work (as usual)


>
> Namely, section 9: Purchase Requests, Contracts, and Receipts section
> seems murky and unnecessary. I'm concerned about the flow between
> sections 4-9. The length of the paper is at around 8 pages now, so
> adding more is probably not a good idea and we probably want to subtract
> some of the content.
>
> Unfortunately, the paper is due by COB on December 12th 2013, so we only
> have around 5 days to complete the paper and submit it. I plan to submit
> whatever we have by 5PM EST on December 11th 2013 just so we don't miss
> the deadline due to some miscommunication or unforeseen event.
>
> If there are spelling/grammatical mistakes or you'd like to clean up the
> flow of the paper, just make the edits directly to the wiki as we don't
> have time to discuss those sorts of changes on this mailing list.
>
> Dave Longley, Digital Bazaar's CTO, will also be submitting responses to
> the actual payment questions raised on behalf of that company. A few
> others on this mailing list will or have already done the same on behalf
> of their companies.
>
> -- manu
>
> --
> Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny)
> Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc.
> blog: Meritora - Web payments commercial launch
> http://blog.meritora.com/launch/
>
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