Re: [w3c/payment-request] Editorial: reworded examples, nits (#827)

ianbjacobs commented on this pull request.



>          </h3>
         <p>
-          The <var>options</var> dictionary contains information the developer
-          needs from the user to perform the payment (e.g., the payer's name
-          and shipping address).
+          Some financial transactions require a user to provide specific
+          information in order for a merchant to fulfill a purchase (e.g., the
+          user's shipping address, in case a physical good needs to be
+          shipped). To request this information, a merchant can pass a third
+          optional argument (<var>options</var>) to the <a>PaymentRequest</a>
+          constructor indicating what information they require. When the
+          payment request is show, the user agent will request this information

```suggestion
          payment request is shown, the user agent will request this information
```

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