Re: [w3c/browser-payment-api] editorial: s/web page/developers (#527)

marcoscaceres requested changes on this pull request.

Nearly there. 

>            the details of the payment request in response to a user interaction.
         </p>
         <p>
-          If the web page wishes to update the payment request then it should
+          If developers wish to update the payment request then they should

I feel like this one should be singular, but stick with gender neutral "they". Also, we shouldn't say "should" there... also, wish is kinda vague (I know it's not your wording, but let's fix it now :)). So:

> If a developer wants to update the payment request, then they need to


> @@ -709,13 +710,13 @@
         </h2>
         <div class="note">
           <p>
-            The <a>abort()</a> method is called if the web page wishes to tell
+            The <a>abort()</a> method is called if developers wish to tell

change this to singular, to match the note above. 

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