Re: [w3c/browser-payment-api] Clarify wording to not imply 'pull' only payments (#474)

marcoscaceres requested changes on this pull request.



> @@ -1761,8 +1761,8 @@
         </h2>
         <p>
           An object that provides a <a>payment method</a> specific message used
-          by the merchant to process the transaction and determine successful
-          fund transfer. This data is returned by the <a>payment method</a>
+          by the merchant to process the transaction or validate the transaction
+          has been processed. This data is returned by the <a>payment method</a>

Can you please rewrite this to use active voice. 

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