Re: [w3c/payment-request] editorial: rewrite pay response details attr (#586)

ianbjacobs approved this pull request.

Looks good. Minor suggestions to adopt as you see fit:

* s/will define/defines in line 2151
* s/formally/generally in line 2153. Though it is unlikely that we would do this, I don't believe there has been a decision that we will never do this. 
* s/whomever/whoever in line 2154 (grammar nit)



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