Re: [w3c/webpayments-method-identifiers] feat: rewrite all the things (#35)

ianbjacobs commented on this pull request.



>        </h2>
       <p>
-        W3C expects to publish a small number of payment method specifications
-        that define abstractions across similar payment methods (such as credit
-        card payments, tokenized payments, or credit transfers). W3C expects
-        these payment methods will be implemented in a wide variety of third
-        party payment apps. W3C identifies these payment methods with (short)
-        strings; W3C expects to mint these strings in payment method
-        specifications published by the Web Payments Working Group.
+        The <a href="https://w3.org">W3C</a> expects to publish a small number
+        of payment method specifications that define abstractions across
+        similar payment methods (such as credit card payments, tokenized
+        payments, or credit transfers). The <a href="https://w3.org">W3C</a>
+        expects these payment methods will be implemented in a wide variety of
+        third party payment handlers. The W3C identifies these payment methods
+        with (short) strings (individual referred to as a <dfn>standardized

s/individual/individually

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