Re: [w3c/webpayments-payment-handler] Editorial changes for FPWD (#138)

ianbjacobs commented on this pull request.



>          the merchant with those supported by registered payment handlers. For
         payment methods that support additional filtering, merchant and payment
         handler capabilities are compared as part of determining whether there
         is a match.
         </li>
-        <li>The user agent displays matching payment handlers, displaying and
-        grouping Instruments according to information (labels and icons)
-        provided at registration or otherwise available from the Web app.
+        <li>The user agent displays a set of choices to the user. These choices
+        are <a data-lt="PaymentManager.instruments">instruments</a> that were
+        registered through the <a>PaymentManager</a> of candidate payment
+        handlers, displaying and grouping the choices according to information
+        (labels and icons) provided at registration or otherwise available from
+        the Web app.
         </li>

Proposed simplification:

<li>The user agent displays a set of choices to the user: the registered
<a data-lt="PaymentManager.instruments">instruments</a> of candidate payment
handlers. The user agent displays and groups these choices according to information
(labels and icons) provided at registration or otherwise available from the Web app.</li>

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