Re: [w3c/browser-payment-api] Editors to figure out text on line items (#477)

Here's one idea for consideration. Old:

"For example, it might include details of products or breakdown of tax and shipping."

New:

 "For example, it might include a breakdown of tax and shipping."

(Example 3 shows this sort of usage.)


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