- From: ianbjacobs <notifications@github.com>
- Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2016 08:23:54 -0700
- To: w3c/browser-payment-api <browser-payment-api@noreply.github.com>
- Message-ID: <w3c/browser-payment-api/issues/278/249898701@github.com>
I counted:
* 1 instance of "after the user has accepted the payment"
* 1 instance of "after the user has accepted the payment request"
* 1 instance of "After the payment request has been accepted "
* 1 instance of "acceptance of the payment request"
* 1 instance of "allows the user to accept the payment request"
* 1 instance of "to ensure that the payment is not accepted until"
* 1 instance of a subhead: "User accepts the payment request algorithm"
which says "user accepts the payment request algorithm runs when
the user accepts the payment request and confirms that they want to pay."
* In that section, 1 instance of "that the user selected to accept the payment. "
Based on that, it seems the sentence in section 11 could be slightly modified to say:
"and ultimately the PaymentResponse object with the user's selected shipping
address after the user has accepted the payment request."
Would it similarly make sense in 15.2.1 to change:
"This is to ensure that the payment is not accepted" to
"This is to ensure that the payment request is not accepted" ?
Ian
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