- From: ianbjacobs <notifications@github.com>
- Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2016 08:23:54 -0700
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I counted: * 1 instance of "after the user has accepted the payment" * 1 instance of "after the user has accepted the payment request" * 1 instance of "After the payment request has been accepted " * 1 instance of "acceptance of the payment request" * 1 instance of "allows the user to accept the payment request" * 1 instance of "to ensure that the payment is not accepted until" * 1 instance of a subhead: "User accepts the payment request algorithm" which says "user accepts the payment request algorithm runs when the user accepts the payment request and confirms that they want to pay." * In that section, 1 instance of "that the user selected to accept the payment. " Based on that, it seems the sentence in section 11 could be slightly modified to say: "and ultimately the PaymentResponse object with the user's selected shipping address after the user has accepted the payment request." Would it similarly make sense in 15.2.1 to change: "This is to ensure that the payment is not accepted" to "This is to ensure that the payment request is not accepted" ? Ian -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/issues/278#issuecomment-249898701
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