- From: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
- Date: Sat, 12 Mar 2016 12:36:58 -0500
- To: Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>, Credentials Community Group <public-credentials@w3.org>
On 03/11/2016 10:17 AM, Eric Korb wrote: > Here are my suggestions: > > I suggest that using "reducing" doesn't always imply the right > connotation. Perhaps we can turn these goals around to say something > like: > > "Improve detection of fraud,..." Done. https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/e374db989290fded6e7d7fa51edc1fd21298a288#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR149 > "Improve operational efficiency..." Done (I had previously rejected the change, but found more positive wording that worked this time... I think). https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/82ea24cb58feec3ffd4d9d361d1bc2dd37649ef6#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR153 > Generally, I think we need to state that our goal is to provide an > implied benefit to all stakeholders: issuers, holders and consumers. > I think the tone we have is bit 1-sided - benefits to consumer only. > For example: Issuers want to protect their reputation, holders want > to ensure their credentials are protected, and the consumers what to > be confident in their decisions. Done. I updated the security/privacy section to lead with your sentence above. I also reworded a good chunk of it to align w/ the wording change: https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/523d463645ed7ef1c906115dbfa3d6dfb6b03f0e#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR218 > Lastly, in a previous comment, I suggested that we call out the need > for internationalization. I believe there was support for the idea. > Can we add words that address "decentralized and extensible > vocabularies with built-in internationalization"? I have added a section on internationalization and accessibility (because we need that too) here: https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/fb21bf23cc85faba24f2e3d7fa967e5a1085e9e6#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR251 -- manu -- Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny) Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc. blog: Web Payments: The Architect, the Sage, and the Moral Voice https://manu.sporny.org/2015/payments-collaboration/
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