- From: Adrian Hope-Bailie <adrian@hopebailie.com>
- Date: Tue, 5 May 2015 23:03:30 +0200
- To: Louise Bennett <louise.bennett@vivasltd.net>
- Cc: Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CA+eFz_+=Asz6hOFZgjgHPv6o-mCx_j5wBqC2MhZv3eG1pBUuXw@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Louise, Thanks for reviewing. On 5 May 2015 at 19:45, Louise Bennett <louise.bennett@vivasltd.net> wrote: > I agree that it is generic, but a possible starting point. What would you do from here if this is still just a starting point? > I think our vision needs to be short and compelling (no more than one side > max) capturing the key points of what we are trying to achieve and why. This is a longer version of what could be represented as 10 bullet points so I think we're okay there. > I think the material also circulated recently by Microsoft might proved a > good starting template re the unbanked etc. > Can you point me to this material? As I said to Manu, we've made reference to financial inclusion but I don't want to give the impression that it's our primary goal. It is a highly desired side-effect of what we are doing. i.e. We are not the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation. Yours > > Louise > > Dr Louise Bennett > Louise.bennett@vivasltd.net > +44 (0)7786 012554 > Vivas ltd, 30 Castelnau, London SW13 9RU > Company: 4136811 > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Manu Sporny [mailto:msporny@digitalbazaar.com] > Sent: 05 May 2015 04:36 > To: public-webpayments-ig@w3.org > Subject: Re: A vision statement for the Internet of Value/Value Web > > On 05/03/2015 03:54 PM, Adrian Hope-Bailie wrote: > > As discussed on a few previous calls I'd like to propose the following > > document as a high-level vision statement for the W3C Web Payments > > initiative. > > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B7WGoj-5M9X_S0-XZYTw6BWi9WytMXta44 > > lhtqZvRjM/edit > > Thanks for putting time into this Adrian, it's very helpful. :) > > We should be more aggressive with the vision. > > We are building value exchange into the Web. It is being designed so that > it is broadly and directly accessible by humankind. This means that we are > putting people and the organizations they want to transact with first. We > are designing the system in the open, at the W3C, with constant public > feedback. > > It will support existing systems, and it will enable the safe and rapid > deployment of new value exchange systems via the Web. > > -------------------- > > More details... > > Overall, I think the document has immediate value in that it places > importance on things like "open standards", "security", "simplicity and > extensibility", and other stuff that the group most likely accepts by > default (otherwise we wouldn't be doing this at the W3C). I don't think it > says it powerfully, though. > > There's a bit of "motherhood and apple pie" to the document. It's not > controversial and so it raises the question on whether or not it would be > compelling to readers. > > The argument against that, though, is that we don't really say what we > stand for - so this document is far better than what we have right now, > which is "not much". > > The rest of my input are nitpicks on the "Value Web" and "Internet of > Value" moniker. I'm not a fan, but have not been able to come up with much > that's better in my brief read of the document tonight. > > > 1. Unify the group and any other stakeholders around a shared vision > > for how value exchange on the Web should work. > > +1 > > > 2. Provide a "rallying call" and descriptive and easy to express name > > for the work we are doing: The Value Web and Internet of Value (which > > can be used interchangeably). > > +1 for "we need a rallying call". -1 in that I don't think the document > is powerful enough to rally folks (yet), and the "Value Web" and "Internet > of Value" monikers need some Marketing work. > > > 3. Provide the foundations for a marketing campaign around the vision > > of the group in an effort to garner support and recruit additional > > participants. > > Isn't this what the Executive Summaries are supposed to do? I agree that > Vision is important too... but we should understand what the recruitment > funnel looks like for the group. > > My expectation was that it was: > > 1. Market-specific Executive Summary > 2. Vision > 3. Call to Action via recruiting touch point 4. W3C Bizdev > > > I would like to propose it as a group Note in the coming weeks. > > A review at the face-to-face and then publication as a group note after > the face-to-face would be a workable timeline. I don't think we'll get > enough review/edits done before then to put something out as a Note. > > -- manu > > -- > Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny) > Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc. > blog: The Marathonic Dawn of Web Payments > http://manu.sporny.org/2014/dawn-of-web-payments/ > > > > >
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