- From: Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2015 08:39:20 -0600
- To: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
- Cc: Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>
> On Mar 2, 2015, at 11:59 PM, Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com> wrote: > > The use cases framework that Ian presented last week at the Use Cases > Task Force meeting has been partially integrated into the Use Cases > document. > > There is still quite a bit of cleanup that needs to be done, but I've > incorporated a work in progress into the document so that folks can see > how it "feels" and comment on if this is a step in the right direction: > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/webpayments/raw-file/default/latest/use-cases/index.html#introduction Hi Manu, Thanks for the integration. I am also glad you got the updated (yesterday!) draft. :) I plan to review it today with Laurent so we may have some changes to propose. I also think the Phases of Payment section should be expanded a little bit. Some ideas (not much thought put into them yet): * For the paragraph that starts “Each phase consists of a series of steps.”, this should be a moment to explain how the doc will work. Give an example of a step or 2 and of a use case or two and show how they relate. Then the full list of steps can follow. * In the slide deck, I found it useful to add a slide with some terminology. I wonder if the terminology needs to come before the phases (which use the terms) I plan this week to revisit what is now 4.1 to see how to rework it in light of the phases/steps. Ian > > -- manu > > -- > Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny) > Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc. > blog: The Marathonic Dawn of Web Payments > http://manu.sporny.org/2014/dawn-of-web-payments/ > > -- Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org> http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs Tel: +1 718 260 9447
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