Re: WP WG Charter review (zach)

> On Jul 16, 2015, at 11:48 PM, Adrian Hope-Bailie <adrian@hopebailie.com> wrote:
> 
> LGTM, although the repetition of the phrase "based on" feels a bit clumsy. Could it be:
> ..."innovation and differentiation from value-added services based on location, mobile banking, marketing relationships…"

+1 will do.
Ian
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