- From: Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 17 Jul 2015 12:21:45 -0500
- To: Adrian Hope-Bailie <adrian@hopebailie.com>
- Cc: Zach Koch <zkoch@google.com>, Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>
Received on Friday, 17 July 2015 17:21:49 UTC
> On Jul 16, 2015, at 11:48 PM, Adrian Hope-Bailie <adrian@hopebailie.com> wrote: > > LGTM, although the repetition of the phrase "based on" feels a bit clumsy. Could it be: > ..."innovation and differentiation from value-added services based on location, mobile banking, marketing relationships…" +1 will do. Ian -- Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org> http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs Tel: +1 718 260 9447
Received on Friday, 17 July 2015 17:21:49 UTC