Language Guide Comments

• From: Lacy . Lee <LLacy@drc.com>
• Date: Mon, 21 Apr 2003 16:30:07 -0400
• To: <public-webont-comments@w3.org>
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Here are some minor (mostly editorial) OWL Language Guide
Comments/Suggestions:

Section 2, paragraph 2, change "addtion" to "addition".
Section 2 namespace examples are identified as "typical", yet they are all
w3.org URIs.  Most implementers will have non-w3.org URIs for their ontology
files.
Section 2.2, paragraph beginning "One common", change "here are the some" to
"here are some".
Section 3.4.3, change "this is" to "hasValue is".
Section 7.1, change "Many of sites" to "Sites".

In section 4.2, the discussion on "sameAs" and "sameIndividualAs" is
confusing.  The guide recommends using "sameIndividualAs", but the reference
document, section 5.2, says that "sameIndividualAs" is supported for
"historical reasons".

Section 3.1.3 helps explain a difficult concept of mixing classes and
instances.  The example is very helpful, but it seems that someone would
name a class "GrapeVarietal" to help reduce confusion.

Received on Monday, 21 April 2003 16:30:22 UTC