[LC Review] from Steven Pemberton on 2006-07-21 (public-webcgm@w3.org from July 2006)

From: Steven Pemberton <steven.pemberton@cwi.nl>
Date: Fri, 21 Jul 2006 11:15:53 +0200
To: public-webcgm@w3.org
Message-ID: <op.tc070rolsmjzpq@acer3010.ins.cwi.nl>

One thing that struck me was how far you have to read before you find out  
what WebCGM actually is. I think that at very least the abstract should  
say what it is. For the uninitiated it is not until section 1.4 that you  
start getting an inkling that it is something to do with 2D graphics.

Steven Pemberton

Received on Friday, 21 July 2006 09:16:23 UTC