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Re: [w3c/webauthn] 658568: Issue #50: Add a Terminology Section

From: J.C. Jones <jjones@mozilla.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Apr 2016 15:55:42 -0700
Message-ID: <CAObDDPBA+zu8Q=J=v7zYxrUjthkKJw7nw80fe2Cyt3STZ_u7XA@mail.gmail.com>
To: W3C WebAuthn WG <public-webauthn@w3.org>
I've opened PR #68 with a first pass at a terminology section. It has
another chunk of end-of-line whitespace cleanups as well, so I recommend
reviewing using the "?w=1" parameter on the end of the URL.

https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/pull/68/files?expand=1&w=1

This places the *Terminology* section just before *Acknowledgements*.

I made a full pass through, attempting to ensure the first use of a term
within a given section was always linked back to the definition.

I also made an effort to always spell out "WebAuthn Relying Party" for the
first use in each section, and remove the use of "RP" (excepting the use of
"RP ID").
The terms here are the top ones I questioned reading the draft. I expect
we'll want to add more, but I figure those can be smaller, more targeted
follow-on changes.

Cheers,

J.C.


On Fri, Apr 8, 2016 at 3:50 PM, GitHub <noreply@github.com> wrote:

>   Branch: refs/heads/50-terminology
>   Home:   https://github.com/w3c/webauthn
>   Commit: 658568b03d076d528e4a9c208df4fa87dd72d2d6
>
> https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/commit/658568b03d076d528e4a9c208df4fa87dd72d2d6
>   Author: J.C. Jones <jjones@mozilla.com>
>   Date:   2016-04-08 (Fri, 08 Apr 2016)
>
>   Changed paths:
>     M index.src.html
>
>   Log Message:
>   -----------
>   Issue #50: Add a Terminology Section
>
> This is a first pass, placing the Terminology section just before
> Acknowledgements.
>
> I made a pass through, attempting to ensure the first use of a term within
> a given section was always linked back to the definition.
>
> I also made an effort to always spell out "WebAuthn Relying Party" for the
> first
> use in each section, and remove the use of "RP" (excepting the use of "RP
> ID").
>
> There are some more whitespace cleanups as well, though I tried to
> minimize them.
>
>
>
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