Re: [w3c/screen-orientation] Minor index.html cleanup (PR #226)

@marcoscaceres commented on this pull request.

For the exceptions, I'm passing just the name (DOMString) of the exception, and then contracting actual exception in the algorithm.  

> @@ -507,7 +506,7 @@ <h2>
           </li>
           <li>If |document|'s {{Document/[[orientationPendingPromise]]}} is not
           `null`, [=reject and nullify the current lock promise=] of |document|
-          with {{"AbortError"}}.
+          with an {{"AbortError"}} {{DOMException}}.

```suggestion
          with an {{"AbortError"}}.
```

>        </p>
       <ol>
         <li>If |document| stops being [=Document/fully active=] while [=in
         parallel=], [=reject and nullify the current lock promise=] of
-        |document| with an {{"AbortError"}}.
+        |document| with an {{"AbortError"}} {{DOMException}}.

```suggestion
        |document| with an {{"AbortError"}}.
```

> @@ -711,12 +710,11 @@ <h2>
             continue.
             </li>
             <li>[=Reject and nullify the current lock promise=] of |doc| with
-            {{"AbortError"}}.
+            an {{"AbortError"}} {{DOMException}}.

```suggestion
            an {{"AbortError"}}.
```

> @@ -726,7 +724,7 @@ <h2>
           <ol>
             <li>If the |document|'s {{Document/[[orientationPendingPromise]]}}
             is not `null`, [=reject and nullify the current lock promise=] of
-            |document| with {{"NotSupportedError"}}.
+            |document| with a {{"NotSupportedError"}} {{DOMException}}.

```suggestion
            |document| with a {{"NotSupportedError"}}.
```

>        </p>
       <ol class="algorithm">
         <li>If |document|'s {{Document/[[orientationPendingPromise]]}} is not
         `null`, [=reject and nullify the current lock promise=] of |document|
-        with {{"AbortError"}}.
+        with an {{"AbortError"}} {{DOMException}}.

```suggestion
        with an {{"AbortError"}}.
```

-- 
Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub:
https://github.com/w3c/screen-orientation/pull/226#pullrequestreview-1154040373
You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread.

Message ID: <w3c/screen-orientation/pull/226/review/1154040373@github.com>