Re: [w3c/permissions] Editorial: clarify Permissions Policy / Powerful Feature overlap (PR #367)

@kenchris commented on this pull request.



>            A <dfn class="export" data-local-lt="feature">powerful feature</dfn> is a web platform
           feature (usually an API) for which a user gives [=express permission=] before the feature
-          can be used. Access to the feature is determined by the user having
-          [=permission/granted=] permission, or by satisfying some criteria that is equivalent to a
-          permission [=permission/grant=].
+          can be used. Except for a few notable exceptions (e.g., the [[[Notifications]]]), most
+          powerful features are also [=policy-controlled features=]. For powerful features that are
+          [=policy-controlled features=], [[[permissions-policy]]] controls whether a [=document=]
+          is [=allowed to use=] a feature, and only if it is allowed can a powerful feature request

"and only if it is allowed can a powerful feature request" this sounds a bit weird to me, maybe move "can" to the end

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