Re: [whatwg/fetch] Editorial: Amend body reading to use no-promise version (PR #1569)

@annevk commented on this pull request.

Thanks! Looks good modulo nits.

>  
- <li><p>If <var>object</var>'s <a for=Body>body</a> is non-null, then set <var>promise</var> to the
- result of <a>fully reading body as promise</a> given <var>object</var>'s <a for=Body>body</a>.
+ <li><p>Let <var>successSteps</var> given a <a>byte sequence</a> <var>bytes</var> be to
+ <a for=/>resolve</a> <var>promise</var> given the result of calling <var>packageSteps</var>

```suggestion
 <a for=/>resolve</a> <var>promise</var> given the result of running <var>packageSteps</var>
```

> + <li><p>If <var>object</var>'s <a for=Body>body</a> is null, then return
+ the result of executing <var>packageSteps</var> given an empty <a for=/>byte sequence</a>.

```suggestion
 <li><p>If <var>object</var>'s <a for=Body>body</a> is null, then return
 <a>a promise resolved with</a> the result of running <var>packageSteps</var> given an empty
 <a for=/>byte sequence</a>.
```

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