Re: [whatwg/xhr] Editorial: Refactor for auto-reporting timing from fetch (PR #347)

@domenic commented on this pull request.

Looks good modulo one phrasing suggestion.

> @@ -960,14 +962,13 @@ return <a>this</a>'s <a>cross-origin credentials</a>.
    <li><p>If <var>processedResponse</var> is false, then set <a>this</a>'s <a>timed out flag</a> and
    <a for="fetch controller">terminate</a> <a>this</a>'s <a for=XMLHttpRequest>fetch controller</a>.
 
+   <li><p>Call <a>this</a>'s <a for=XMLHttpRequest>fetch controller</a>'s
+   <a for="fetch controller">report timing</a> given the <a>current global object</a>.

This would be a bit more conventional as "Report timing for this's fetch controller given the current global object".

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