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- Date: Thu, 10 Sep 2020 09:29:32 +0000 (UTC)
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@annevk commented on this pull request. Generally this looks great, thanks for working on this! I have left a couple of formatting nits and I'm happy to help with those once we're further along. We'll need a lot of tests to cover the various conditions and new behavior of `observe()`. I'm a little concerned about the agreement. Typically a person in a management or a very senior engineer would sign it (or at least be an alternate), but neither appears to be the case here, assuming I have interpreted your title correctly. As it seems this is a very big company, have legal et al signed off on this? > @@ -3320,6 +3320,8 @@ dictionary MutationObserverInit { boolean attributeOldValue; boolean characterDataOldValue; sequence<DOMString> attributeFilter; + sequence<DOMString> elementFilterByAttribute; + sequence<DOMString> elementLocalNameFilter; Shall we name this `elementFilter` to match `attributeFilter`? > @@ -3594,6 +3625,60 @@ run these steps: <ol> <li><p>Assert: either <var>addedNodes</var> or <var>removedNodes</var> <a for=set>is not empty</a>. + <li><p>If either <var>options</var>'s' {{MutationObserverInit/elementLocalNameFilter}} or + {{MutationObserverInit/elementFilterByAttribute}} is present, then: + + <ol> + <li><p>Let <var>nodeAttributesList</var> be the set of local names of node's attributes. What is node referring to here? I feel like this is lacking some references to other variables. > @@ -3594,6 +3625,60 @@ run these steps: <ol> <li><p>Assert: either <var>addedNodes</var> or <var>removedNodes</var> <a for=set>is not empty</a>. + <li><p>If either <var>options</var>'s' {{MutationObserverInit/elementLocalNameFilter}} or + {{MutationObserverInit/elementFilterByAttribute}} is present, then: Since this `<p>` isn't the only child of the `<li>`, it needs to be on its own line, indented one. This also goes for the following `<ol>`, which is not indented accurately. > @@ -3594,6 +3625,60 @@ run these steps: <ol> <li><p>Assert: either <var>addedNodes</var> or <var>removedNodes</var> <a for=set>is not empty</a>. + <li><p>If either <var>options</var>'s' {{MutationObserverInit/elementLocalNameFilter}} or + {{MutationObserverInit/elementFilterByAttribute}} is present, then: + + <ol> + <li><p>Let <var>nodeAttributesList</var> be the set of local names of node's attributes. + + <li><p>Let <var>filteredAddedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li><p>Let <var>filterRemovedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li> + <p>For each <var>node</var> in <var>addedNodes</var></a>. A for each should end in a `:`. > @@ -3594,6 +3625,60 @@ run these steps: <ol> <li><p>Assert: either <var>addedNodes</var> or <var>removedNodes</var> <a for=set>is not empty</a>. + <li><p>If either <var>options</var>'s' {{MutationObserverInit/elementLocalNameFilter}} or + {{MutationObserverInit/elementFilterByAttribute}} is present, then: + + <ol> + <li><p>Let <var>nodeAttributesList</var> be the set of local names of node's attributes. + + <li><p>Let <var>filteredAddedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li><p>Let <var>filterRemovedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li> + <p>For each <var>node</var> in <var>addedNodes</var></a>. + + <li> I would expect a for each to be followed by a nested list so there's an `<ol>` missing here I think. > + + <ol> + <li><p>Let <var>nodeAttributesList</var> be the set of local names of node's attributes. + + <li><p>Let <var>filteredAddedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li><p>Let <var>filterRemovedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li> + <p>For each <var>node</var> in <var>addedNodes</var></a>. + + <li> + <p>If none of the following are true + + <ul class=brief> + <li>if <var>options</var>'s s/if// I think? Same below. If not I'd try to reword these to be more clearly true/false statements. > + <li><p>Let <var>nodeAttributesList</var> be the set of local names of node's attributes. + + <li><p>Let <var>filteredAddedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li><p>Let <var>filterRemovedNodes</var> be an empty <a for=/>list</a>. + + <li> + <p>For each <var>node</var> in <var>addedNodes</var></a>. + + <li> + <p>If none of the following are true + + <ul class=brief> + <li>if <var>options</var>'s + {{MutationObserverInit/elementLocalNameFilter}} is present, and + "<code>node.localName</code>" is in {{MutationObserverInit/elementLocalNameFilter}} What is node.localName and why is it formatted this way? Is that a special value? -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/whatwg/dom/pull/885#pullrequestreview-485741098
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