Re: [whatwg/fetch] [WIP] Request domintro box (#617)

Yay, this is awesome!! My own nits:

> Returns a new request whose url attribute value is input if input is a string, and input’s url 

These "url"s should be `{{Request/url}}` so they get to be monospace. Also, in web developer facing documentation, I prefer to say "property" instead of "attribute" (probably "value" is also redundant?).

> "Referer" header

should use backticks instead of "s since headers are byte sequences.

> Returns request’s subresource integrity

"subresource integrity metadata"?

In general I think even though it takes you into the "main" spec, away from web-developer documentation, cross-linking to concepts (e.g. `<a>credentials mode</a>`) is nice for people who want to follow up and learn more about the specifics.


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