Re: [whatwg/fetch] [WIP] Request domintro box (#617)

annevk commented on this pull request.



> + <var>init</var>])</code>
+ <dd>Returns a new <var>request</var> whose <a attribute for=Request>url</a> attribute value is
+ <var>input</var> if <var>input</var> is a string, and <var>input</var>'s
+ <a attribute for=Request>url</a> if <var>input</var> is a {{Request}} object. The optional
+ <var>init</var> argument allows for setting attributes appearing in {{RequestInit}} via object
+ members of the same name.
+
+ <dt><code><var>request</var> . <a attribute for=Request>method</a></code>
+ <dd>Returns <var>request</var>'s HTTP method, which is "<code>GET</code>" by default.
+
+ <dt><code><var>request</var> . <a attribute for=Request>url</a></code>
+ <dd>Returns the URL of <var>request</var> as a string.
+
+ <dt><code><var>request</var> . <a attribute for=Request>headers</a></code>
+ <dd>Returns a {{Headers}} object consisting of the headers associated with <var>request</var>.
+ It should be noted that headers added in the network layer by the user agent will not be accounted

s/It should be noted that//
(you cannot use terms like "should", "must", or "may" in non-normative text)

> + <dd>Returns a new <var>request</var> whose <a attribute for=Request>url</a> attribute value is
+ <var>input</var> if <var>input</var> is a string, and <var>input</var>'s
+ <a attribute for=Request>url</a> if <var>input</var> is a {{Request}} object. The optional
+ <var>init</var> argument allows for setting attributes appearing in {{RequestInit}} via object
+ members of the same name.
+
+ <dt><code><var>request</var> . <a attribute for=Request>method</a></code>
+ <dd>Returns <var>request</var>'s HTTP method, which is "<code>GET</code>" by default.
+
+ <dt><code><var>request</var> . <a attribute for=Request>url</a></code>
+ <dd>Returns the URL of <var>request</var> as a string.
+
+ <dt><code><var>request</var> . <a attribute for=Request>headers</a></code>
+ <dd>Returns a {{Headers}} object consisting of the headers associated with <var>request</var>.
+ It should be noted that headers added in the network layer by the user agent will not be accounted
+ for in this object, e.g. the "<code>Host</code>" header.

comma after e.g. too.

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