[w3c/ServiceWorker] Add specific Processing headings + minor editorial (#1071)

This splits the “Link type "serviceworker"” ≫ “Processing” section into
two sections with separate headings:

* Processing the Link header
* Processing the link element

It also includes a minor editorial change to add the word “or” in a
place where lack of it makes the text ambiguous; this sentence:

> When a serviceworker link’s link element is inserted into a document,
> a serviceworker link is created on a link element that is already in a
> document tree, or the href or scope attributes of the link element of a
> serviceworker link is changed, the user agent should run these steps

...could be read as saying:

> When a serviceworker link’s link element is inserted into a document,
> **then** a serviceworker link is created on a link element...

When what it actually seems to mean is:

> When a serviceworker link’s link element is inserted into a document,
> **or** a serviceworker link is created on a link element...

That “or” is somewhat implied from the rest of the sentence, but this
this change just inserts an explicit “or” to make it more clear.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/w3c/ServiceWorker/pull/1071

-- Commit Summary --

  * Add specific Processing headings + minor editorial

-- File Changes --

    M docs/index.bs (6)
    M docs/index.html (48)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/w3c/ServiceWorker/pull/1071.patch
https://github.com/w3c/ServiceWorker/pull/1071.diff

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