Re: [w3c/permissions] Editorial fixes (#100)

> @@ -201,46 +201,52 @@ spec: webidl
>  
>    <section>
>      <h3 id="reading-current-states">Reading the current permission state</h3>
> -    <p>
> -      |descriptor|'s <dfn export local-lt="state">permission state</dfn> is one
> -      of {{"granted"}}, {{"prompt"}}, or {{"denied"}}, indicating respectively
> -      if the calling algorithm should:
> -    </p>
> +    <div algorithm="read-current-permission-state">
> +      <p>
> +        To <dfn export>read the current permission state</dfn>, use the

Can we use something like `|descriptor|'s <dfn export local-lt="state">permission state</dfn> is the result of the following algorithm.`? We *could* define two phrases that mean the same thing, but it seems redundant. I defined "permission state" as the name because @annevk wanted a really concise way to get to this value, in #74 request 2.

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