Re: [w3c/permissions] Editorial fixes (#100)

>      granted without allowing the developer to check beforehand.
>    </p>
>    <p>
> -    Being able to know whether an API call is going to prompt is useful in
> -    order to provide a good user experience. Unfortunately, more often than
> -    not, those prompts can't be controlled by developers.
> +    The Permissions API provides the tools that potentially allow developers to
> +    improve the user experience of web applications that require
> +    multiple permission requests.

How about "The Permissions API provides tools for developers to control when permission prompts are shown and to give up permissions that are no longer needed."? "tools that potentially allow" sounds like too much hedging.

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