Re: [w3c/FileAPI] Improve readability of Blob-related statements (#42)

> @@ -611,8 +607,8 @@ It must act as follows:
>  <h4 id="close-method">
>  The close method</h4>
>  
> -The <dfn id="dfn-close" method for=Blob>close()</dfn> method is said to <a lt="closed" for=Blob>close</a> a {{Blob}},
> -and must act as follows on the {{Blob}} on which the method has been called:
> +The <dfn id="dfn-close" method for=Blob>close()</dfn> method is said to <a lt="closed" for=Blob>close</a>
> +the {{Blob}} context object when it acts on the {{Blob}} as follows:

I don't really like this rephrasing, in particular using "when" to combine the two sentence fragments sounds wrong to me (but I'm not a native english speaker). I'd rather just get rid of the whole "on the {{Blob}} on which the method has been called" part, but otherwise keep the current text. 

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