Re: [w3c/pointerlock] Expanded/clarified introduction (#6)

> @@ -141,12 +141,14 @@
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>        <h2>Introduction</h2>
>  
> -      <p>The Pointer Lock API provides for input methods of applications based on
> -      the movement of the mouse, not just the absolute position of a cursor.  A
> +      <p>The Pointer Lock API provides applications with the ability to directly interpret mouse movements

"provide with" seems more appropriate in this case (see http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/provide example "A submarine fleet is still essential in providing Canada with the necessary means to defend the world's longest coastline"). but perhaps this is a en-gb vs en-us thing?

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