Re: [push-api] Rewording abstract text again (#152)

> @@ -97,13 +97,13 @@
>    <body>
>      <section id='abstract'>
>        <p>
> -        The <cite>Push API</cite> provides <a title="webapp">webapps</a> with scripted access to
> -        server-sent messages, for simplicity referred to here as <a title="push message">push
> -        messages</a>, as delivered by <a title="push service">push services</a>. A <a>push
> -        service</a> allows an <a>application server</a> to send messages to a <a>webapp</a>,
> -        regardless of whether the <a>webapp</a> is currently active on the <a>user agent</a>. The
> -        <a>push message</a> will be delivered to a <a>Service Worker</a>, which could then store
> -        the message's data or display a notification to the user.
> +        The <cite>Push API</cite> enables sending of a <a>push message</a> to a <a>webapp</a> via
> +        a <a>push service</a>.  An <a>application server</a> can send a <a>push message</a> at any
> +        time, even when the <a>webapp</a> is active or the <a>user agent</a> is offline.
> +        The <a>push service</a> ensures reliable and efficient delivery to the <a>user
> +        agent</a>.  <a title="push message">Push messages</a> are delivered to a <a>Service

Double spaces after periods will be stripped by html tidy (did you run it?). Also, they're not rendered.

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