- From: Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 26 Jul 2007 21:55:53 +0200
- To: "Charles McCathieNevile" <chaals@opera.com>
- Cc: public-webapi@w3.org
Great ! Here are more typos On http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/webapi/network-api/network-api.html?rev=1.3 == missing comas == "To enable Web applications to communicate using TCP this specification introduces the TCPSocket interface and a corresponding optional security model." --> "To enable Web applications to communicate using TCP, this specification introduces the TCPSocket interface and a corresponding optional security model." "Once a connection is established the connect event must be fired on the TCPSocket object." --> "Once a connection is established, the connect event must be fired on the TCPSocket object. == fuzzy == "The TCPSocket interface enables a TCP connection from the client to the server from which the script was downloaded and executed from" Please explain on what apply "and executed from" ? == precisions == "with a dot separating the two strings" --> "with a dot (U+002E DOT) separating the two strings" == Consistencies in Reference == The date in the reference part are all "month year", except the last one. Please do make them consistent Regards, Mohamed On 7/26/07, Charles McCathieNevile <chaals@opera.com> wrote: > On Thu, 26 Jul 2007 21:04:05 +0200, Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > In > > http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/webapi/network-api/network-api.html?rev=1.2&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1 > [various typos and editorial errors] > > Thanks Mohamed, > > I will publish a new editors' draft in a few minutes with these > corrections made... > > cheers > > Chaals > > -- > Charles McCathieNevile, Opera Software: Standards Group > hablo español - je parle français - jeg lærer norsk > chaals@opera.com Catch up: Speed Dial http://opera.com > -- Innovimax SARL Consulting, Training & XML Development 9, impasse des Orteaux 75020 Paris Tel : +33 9 52 475787 Fax : +33 1 4356 1746 http://www.innovimax.fr RCS Paris 488.018.631 SARL au capital de 10.000 €
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