- From: <karl@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 26 Jul 2006 07:30:04 -0000
- To: public-webapi@w3.org
Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Selectors API"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/
2006-05-25
1st WD
About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/
* Abstract
[[[
This specification defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
]]]
We encourage you to not use "this specification" to start sentences. Maybe:
[[[
Selectors API defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
]]]
* Introduction typo?
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/#introduction
[[[
[Selectors], mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, provides a way of
matching such a set of elements.
]]]
to replace with
[[[
Selectors [Selectors] mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context,
provides a way of matching such a set of elements.
]]]
* Typo
[[[
Using psuedo-elements …
]]]
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Karl Dubost - http://www.w3.org/People/karl/
W3C Conformance Manager, QA Activity Lead
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