[selectors-api] Editorial

Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Selectors API"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/
2006-05-25
1st WD

About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/

* Abstract
 [[[
 This specification defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
 DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
 ]]]

We encourage you to not use "this specification" to start sentences. Maybe:

 [[[
 Selectors API defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
 DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
 ]]]

* Introduction typo?
  http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/#introduction

 [[[
 [Selectors], mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, provides a way of 
 matching such a set of elements.
 ]]]
to replace with
 [[[  
 Selectors [Selectors] mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, 
 provides a way of matching such a set of elements.
 ]]]

* Typo 
 [[[
 Using psuedo-elements …
 ]]]
 



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Received on Wednesday, 26 July 2006 07:30:21 UTC