- From: Greg Billock <gbillock@google.com>
- Date: Wed, 30 May 2012 11:21:46 -0700
- To: Jean-Claude Dufourd <jean-claude.dufourd@telecom-paristech.fr>
- Cc: "public-web-intents@w3.org" <public-web-intents@w3.org>
:-) How about "... the Intent must be delivered to the Service page." (Thanks for the comments; I've changed the other one locally; I'll upload it along with this and other corrections and fixes soon.) On Wed, May 30, 2012 at 10:05 AM, Jean-Claude Dufourd <jean-claude.dufourd@telecom-paristech.fr> wrote: > Section 4.2, item 4, last sentence: > > "If any satisfying match is found, the Intent must be delivered." > > Sorry to be so picky, but I find this conciseness shocking. Please make the > target of delivery explicit, even though it should be obvious. Something > like: > > "If any satisfying match is found, the Intent must be delivered to the > Service page of the matching intent element." > > Thanks > JC > > -- > JC Dufourd > Directeur d'Etudes/Professor > Groupe Multimedia/Multimedia Group > Traitement du Signal et Images/Signal and Image Processing > Telecom ParisTech, 37-39 rue Dareau, 75014 Paris, France > Tel: +33145817733 - Mob: +33677843843 - Fax: +33145817144
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