added my comments from the email — to the Google doc <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qFOc8cip3tKbH35XsxwYpZXxycLMhVgblbabg5V4UCY/edit?usp=sharing>.
> On Oct 20, 2025, at 8:30 AM, Daniel Montalvo Charameli <dmontalvo@w3.org> wrote:
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> Hi all.
>
> I’ve put my comments on proposal 3 (Gregg, Mike, and Mary Jo’s iteration) the Google doc, at the bottom of the document.
>
> Best.
>
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> Daniel Montalvo Charameli
> Principal Accessibility Specialist
> W3C/WAI
>
> From: Mary Jo Mueller <maryjom@us.ibm.com>
> Sent: Thursday, October 16, 2025 6:07 PM
> To: WCAG2ICT <public-wcag2ict-tf@w3.org>
> Subject: [WCAG2ICT] Google doc for 2.4.2 Page Titled
>
> Hi all,
>
> I copied in the original editor’s draft content (Proposal 0) which is only there for reference.
>
> We have 3 variations of proposed updates for 2.4.2 Page Titled in the Google doc <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qFOc8cip3tKbH35XsxwYpZXxycLMhVgblbabg5V4UCY/edit?usp=sharing>. Please review and give feedback during the week so we can hopefully reach consensus by the next meeting.
>
> Gregg, you were also going to work on some alternate language for Orientation (for the example/note) that we didn’t get back to during the meeting. If you can send me that, I can create a Google doc to compare changes/proposals in a single place.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Mary Jo Mueller
> IBM Accessibility Standards Program Manager