RE: Discussion Draft of last 3 provisions -- using Document and Software language

I think this is great, thanks very much Gregg!

One tweak I would ask is that content in the second "replaces" column be expanded a little so that the punctuation  (parenthesis and slash) is not necessary.  This will add some redundancy, but the chart will still be very succint.

Received on Saturday, 27 October 2012 12:07:19 UTC