Re: ACTION-69: Edits to closed functionality text

Andi,

This is fine.  I thought of some very minor word tweaks, but I think it 
is better to simply invite an overall editorial pass by someone more 
expert in writing technical material than I am.


Regards,

Peter
On 10/17/2012 8:25 PM, Andi Snow-Weaver wrote:
>
> Pierce has proposed some editorial changes to the text we agreed to 
> Tuesday for the introductory section on Closed Functionality. You can 
> read them in proposal #8 at
>
> https://sites.google.com/site/wcag2ict/home/introduction-to-wcag2ict-application-note
>
> In my opinion, these are editorial changes that do not change the 
> meaning of what we agreed to. There are some slight wording changes 
> and some sentences are moved from the text after the list to the text 
> above the list.
>
> Does anyone think we need to re-survey this text?
>
> Andi
>

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