Re: Two review versions of WCAG2ICT

On Dec 12, 2012, at 4:12 PM, Peter Korn <peter.korn@oracle.com> wrote:

> On 12/12/2012 12:31 PM, Michael Cooper wrote:
>> 
>> ...
>>> PK:
>>> Shouldn't ALL of the "Additional guidance" blocks be: "Additional guidance when applying {Guideline | Success Criterion} [x.y{.z}] toElectronic Non-Web Documents and Software Aspects of Products:" ??  I thought that was part of the global search & replace.
>> MC: Yeah, I guess it should have been. This text comes out of my XSLT file, not the actual  and I didn't apply the search / replace there. I've fixed that now.
> 
> I now see: "Additional guidance when applying {Guideline | Success Criterion} [x.y{.z}] to Non-Web Documents and Software Aspects of Products:" everywhere.  That's half of the change, but I thought it would end at "Software".  Not still "Software Aspects of Products".  
> 
> Thus (I thought) it would read: "Additional guidance when applying {Guideline | Success Criterion} [x.y{.z}] to Non-Web Documents and Software:"
> 
> Could you please make that further change?  [note that since "Software" is one of our key terms and that definition incorporates "software products or software aspects of hardware-software products", we are fine ending each "Additional guidance" lines at "software".
>   


GV: This is correct. I thought we had gone through and made that change on all of the pages of the website.  

The web pages all read
Additional guidance when applying to Non-Web Documents and Software

But adding the specifics (if that is not too much trouble) would make it clearer which one this referred to.   

So if you can -- please make it:

Additional guidance when applying {Guideline | Success Criterion} [x.y{.z}] to Non-Web Documents and Software.