Re: Two review versions of WCAG2ICT

Peter Korn wrote:
> Michael,
>
>
> On 12/12/2012 12:31 PM, Michael Cooper wrote:
> I now see: "Additional guidance when applying {Guideline | Success
> Criterion} [x.y{.z}] to Non-Web Documents and Software Aspects of
> Products:" everywhere.  That's half of the change, but I thought it
> would end at "Software".  Not still "Software Aspects of Products". 
>
> Thus (I thought) it would read: "Additional guidance when applying
> {Guideline | Success Criterion} [x.y{.z}] to Non-Web Documents and
> Software:"
>
> Could you please make that further change?  [note that since
> "Software" is one of our key terms and that definition incorporates
> "software products or software aspects of hardware-software products",
> we are fine ending each "Additional guidance" lines at "software".
Sorry, everything's blurring I guess and I missed that detail. Fixed now.
>  
> Yup, looks good.  If they require our back-up plan, you'll also need
> to put brackets around [set of non-web documents] and red-ify it...
Right, overlooked that; fixed in the staging version.

Also there was a small tweak to the 3.2.4 modified text based on what
Gregg referenced in the WCAG survey. The rest of Gregg's comments I
think were +1 to Peter, so I believe it's caught up to this point in the
thread.

Michael
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Michael Cooper
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