SC 2.1.1 - failure due to using script

Hi,

Re SC 2.1.1 technique of 'failure due to using script to remove focus when focus is received':

The description refers to the visual indicator of focus and seems to correlate the hiding of the visual indicator with a loss of focus on the element. I don't believe the focus is lost because the visual indicator is not visible.

I suggest the following for the description:

"Content that normally attains focus when the content is accessed by keyboard may have this focus removed by scripting. This typically means the content can only be accessed by a pointer device, such as a mouse."

Also, the 'expected result' is in a different format to other failure techniques (usually has: If any are found, then this failure condition applies and content fails the success criterion. ). 
Should this be changed to be consistent with the others?

Thanks,
Sofia

[1] http://trace.wisc.edu/wcag_wiki/index.php?title=Failure_due_to_using_script_to_remove_focus_when_focus_is_received