RE: L3 SC4: Intent of this success criterion

Thanks, Loretta. A couple of small editorial changes:


<proposalWithEdits>
The intent of this success criterion is to help users understand what
information is contained in different sections of the content. When
sections have clear and descriptive titles, users can find the
information they seek more easily, and they can understand the
relationships between different parts of the content more easily.
</proposalWithEdits>
<Loretta's proposal>
The intent of this success criterion is to help user understand what
information is contained in different sections of the content. By
titling sections clearly and descriptively, users can find the
information they seek more easily, and they can understand the
relationships between different parts of the content more easily.
</Loretta's proposal>

<current>
The intent of this success criterion is to help users understand how
content is organized.
 
</current>

John

"Good design is accessible design."

Dr. John M. Slatin, Director 
Accessibility Institute
University of Texas at Austin 
FAC 248C 
1 University Station G9600 
Austin, TX 78712 
ph 512-495-4288, fax 512-495-4524 
email jslatin@mail.utexas.edu 
Web http://www.utexas.edu/research/accessibility 



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Subject: L3 SC4: Intent of this success criterion



Current text:
 
The intent of this success criterion is to help users understand how
content is organized.
 
Proposed text:
 
The intent of this success criterion is to help user understand what
information is contained in different sections of the content. By
titling sections clearly and descriptively, users can find the
information they seek more easily, and they can understand the
relationships between different parts of the content more easily.


Loretta Guarino Reid
lguarino@adobe.com
Adobe Systems, Acrobat Engineering

Received on Monday, 19 September 2005 16:38:59 UTC