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[wbs] response to 'Approval for draft publication of WCAG-EM'

From: WBS Mailer on behalf of bim@w3.org <webmaster@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 06 Dec 2013 16:27:01 +0000
To: bim@w3.org,public-wcag-em-comments@w3.org,shadi@w3.org,e.velleman@accessibility.nl
Message-Id: <wbs-6d201d3cca81a82651d13208af83677c@cgi.w3.org>
The following answers have been successfully submitted to 'Approval for
draft publication of WCAG-EM' (public) for Bim Egan.


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Abstract
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 * ( ) accept this section as draft
 * (x) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 Priority: Mild suggestion;
Location: Second paragraph; both first and second sentences 
Current wording: contains the adjective "primarily" in both sentences.
Suggest: one of the instances could use the word "mainly".
Rationale: avoids repetition.  


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Introduction
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 * ( ) accept this section as draft
 * (x) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 Priority: Strong suggestion: 
Location: second paragraph, first sentence.
Current wording: "... and highlights considerations that evaluators to
apply these steps in the context of a particular website." 
Suggestion: rephrase "that evaluators to apply ", 
Rationale: as is, this sentence seems incomplete, (sorry no suggested
alternative as I'm not sure what's meant) . 


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Using This Methodology
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 


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Scope of Applicability
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 


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Step 1: Define the Evaluation Scope
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 


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Step 2: Explore the Target Website
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 


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Step 3: Select a Representative Sample
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 


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Step 4: Audit the Selected Sample
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 


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Step 5: Record the Evaluation Findings
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 * (x) accept this section as draft
 * ( ) accept this section as draft with the following suggestions
 * ( ) I do not accept this section as draft
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)
 

These answers were last modified on 6 December 2013 at 16:24:53 U.T.C.
by Bim Egan

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/1/WCAG-EM-20131129/ until 2013-12-17.

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