[EOWG Videos] please re-review updated script for Martine

Dear Videos Subgroup,

For tomorrow's call, please re-review the updated script for Martine before we park it aside for a bit:

  *   https://wai-people-use-web-videos.netlify.app/people-use-web/videos/stories/martine/

The most significant change is re-order of sequence 5, that is now sequence 2. This is based on Jade's comment, to explain the use and importance of sign language earlier in the video. Most sections also have light editorial tweaks based on all your comments. Please double check the current sequence 5 on writing/text. Here is a list of the issues that were addressed in this round (feel free to re-open any, if needed):

  *   https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web-videos/issues?q=is%3Aissue+is%3Aclosed

Here are open issues for discussion as well, please take a look and comment on them if you can:

  *   https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web-videos/issues?q=is%3Aopen+is%3Aissue

Thanks,
  Shadi

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Shadi Abou-Zahra
Amazon, Devices Accessibility
Principal Standards and Policy Manager
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