RE: [wbs] response to 'Videos - How People With Disabilities Use Web - Initial Scripts Starfish Review'

Dear Carlos,

Many thanks for your valuable review and responses!

The videos subgroup discussed your comments:
- https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web-videos/issues?q=is%3Aissue+author%3Acarlosapaduarte


#74: involves a substantial change -- do you agree how this was addressed?
#75: involves some editorial work -- do you agree how this was addressed?

Please feel free to add further thoughts to these issues, especially if you disagree with how they are being addressed.

Many thanks,
  Shadi

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Shadi Abou-Zahra
Amazon, Devices Accessibility
Principal Standards and Policy Manager
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> Introduction
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> Please Note: Due to project timeline, this review will not be extended 
> past Sunday, July 24th.
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> This is a Starfish Review survey for initial video scripts for the How 
> People With Disabilities Use the Web Video Project.
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> What you're reviewing are draft scripts for three different videos 
> that will support the WAI resource How People With Disabilities Use 
> the Web, which is currently under revision. Estimated review time is 
> between 40 and 60 minutes.
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> Background: Each video script is based in part on the three pages of 
> the existing resource. The videos are meant to be an alternative 
> format representing key information from user stories or topics from 
> the following pages:
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>    * Stories of Web Users
>    * Diverse Abilities and Barriers
>    * Tools and Techniques
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> When finalized, these three video scripts will become the "templates"
> (format, structure and style) used to make the rest of the videos that 
> support the entire resource. See the Video Scripts overview page for 
> the full list of videos that will be produced.
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> For this review please consider:
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>    * Is the "Martine" User Story represented well - is anything missing?
>    * Are the "Auditory" Abilities and Barriers represented well - is 
> anything missing?
>    * Are the "Presentation Distinguishing and Understanding" Tools and 
> Techniques represented well - is anything missing?
>    * Is there anything that should not be included?
>    * Try to catch all significant issues in this review. (if you bring 
> up big issues later, they could be disruptive)
>    * Please provide high-level word-smithing suggestions if you have 
> the time via GitHub Issue.
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Comments:



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> Review level
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 * [ ] I reviewed it thoroughly.
 * [ ] I skimmed it.
 * [ ] I pass on this review and will not raise big issues later.

Comments:



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> "Martine" Video Script - Stories of Web Users
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> Do you have any feedback on the current draft of the "Martine" user 
> story script? This can include feedback and proposed changes to the 
> audio, visuals, timing, style, and perspective of the script that will 
> be used for video production.
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> Please conduct the review in the following order:
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>      * Read over the latest version of the Martine user story page. Note:
> This is not for review; for background only.
>      * Review the Martine video script.
>      * Add comments or recommended edits directly in a new Martine 
> GitHub Issue (or review and add to existing GitHub issues).
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> If not comfortable raising GitHub issues, you may provide your 
> comments in the box below (not preferred).
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Comments:



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> "Auditory" Video Script - Diverse Abilities and Barriers
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> Do you have any feedback on the current draft of the "Auditory" 
> diverse abilities and barriers script? This can include feedback and 
> proposed changes to the audio, visuals, timing, style, and perspective 
> of the script that will be used for video production.
>
> Please conduct the review in the following order:
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>      * Read over the latest version of the Auditory - Diverse 
> Abilities and Barriers page. Note: This is not for review; for background only.
>      * Review the Auditory video script.
>      * Add comments or recommended edits directly in a new Auditory 
> GitHub Issue (or review and add to existing GitHub issues).
>
> If not comfortable raising GitHub issues, you may provide your 
> comments in the box below (not preferred).
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Comments:



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> "Presentation distinguishing and understanding" Video Script - Tools 
> and Techniques
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> Do you have any feedback on the current draft of the "Presentation 
> distinguishing and understanding" tools and techniques script? This 
> can include feedback and proposed changes to the audio, visuals, 
> timing, style, and perspective of the script that will be used for 
> video production.
>
> Please conduct the review in the following order:
>
>      * Read over the latest version of the Presentation distinguishing 
> and understanding - Tools and Techniques page. Note: This is not for 
> review; for background only.
>      * Review the Presentation video script.
>      * Add comments or recommended edits directly in a new 
> Presentation GitHub Issue (or review and add to existing GitHub issues).
>
> If not comfortable raising GitHub issues, you may provide your 
> comments in the box below (not preferred).
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Comments:



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> Final Comments
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> Thank you for taking the time to provide your review of these video 
> scripts.
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> Please provide any final thoughts or comments you may have about these 
> initial scripts in the comment field below.
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Comments:

Good duration estimate. It took me 65 minutes to complete the survey!

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> These answers were last modified on 21 July 2022 at 16:24:53 U.T.C.
> by Carlos Duarte
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Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/HPWD-initial-videos-starfish/ until 2022-07-24.

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