RE: [EOWG Videos] *timely* please review changes

Hi Shadi.
I have reviewed Michele's reword. Added to GitHub that I think it is good. Also like the inclusion of the background noise. Simply stated.

I am good with it as is.
Thanks Michele.

Brent

From: Abou-Zahra, Shadi <sabouzah@amazon.at>
Sent: Wednesday, July 13, 2022 8:42 AM
To: public-wai-wcag-videos@w3.org
Subject: [EOWG Videos] *timely* please review changes

Dear EOWG Video Subgroup,

Please review the following version of the "Presentation" script by *Thursday 14 July end of your day*:

  *   https://deploy-preview-70--wai-people-use-web-videos.netlify.app/people-use-web/videos/tools/presentation/

For your context, this version is to address Michele's suggestions in issue #69:

  *   https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web-videos/issues/69

The version of the script that you last reviewed is also still available if you want to compare the two versions:

  *   https://wai-people-use-web-videos.netlify.app/people-use-web/videos/tools/presentation/

Many thanks,
  Shadi

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Amazon, Devices Accessibility
Principal Standards and Policy Manager
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