RE: E2R sentence in pre-call

HI Shawn
This works well for me - thanks.


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From: Shawn Henry [shawn@w3.org]
Sent: Thursday, 7 June 2012 5:26 AM
To: Klaus Miesenberger; RDWG
Subject: E2R sentence in pre-call

Hi Klaus and all,

For the E2R sentence in the Text Customization for Readability pre-call, I tried to further simplify the sentence structure to eliminate semicolons. Please see the sentence starting with "A related upcoming Symposium will address Easy-to-Read (E2R) language..." at http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki/Topic_3_pre-call

Does this work? Do you have other suggestions? (feel free to edit the wiki yourself, or send suggestions to me and I'll edit the wiki)

Thanks!
~Shawn

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Received on Friday, 8 June 2012 00:11:13 UTC