- From: giorgio brajnik <brajnik@uniud.it>
- Date: Tue, 28 Feb 2012 22:24:22 +0100
- To: Yeliz Yesilada <yyeliz@metu.edu.tr>
- CC: RDWG RDWG <public-wai-rd@w3.org>
Thank you, Yeliz. We will consider your suggestions. Giorgio Brajnik ______________________________________________________________________ Dip. di Matematica e Informatica | voice: +39 (0432) 55.8445 Università di Udine | fax: +39 (0432) 55.8499 Via delle Scienze, 206 | email: brajnik@uniud.it Loc. Rizzi -- 33100 Udine -- ITALY | http://www.dimi.uniud.it/giorgio On 02/28/2012 09:02 PM, Yeliz Yesilada wrote: > Dear All, > > I won't be able to attend the meeting tomorrow as I have to attend another departmental meeting at the same time. > > Regarding the research note, I have the following two comments. These are really for editors' discretion. > 1.Section 3.7 is quite an interesting section, however I think this section has a different purpose to other subsections (3.1-3.6). I think even though subsections (3.1-3.6) summarises the papers presented at the webinar, subsection 3.7 has a slightly different purpose, at least in my understanding. I think it would be good if the editors could consider and reorganise this section. > > 2. In section 4.1.1, it seems like the research questions are somehow mixed with research statements, it would be good if the editors could update that section to include only research questions to be consistent with the other sections. > > 3. There are also a number of orphaned section titles (I mean section titles that are immediately followed with subsection titles, for example 4.4.Other Issues 4.4.1 User tailored meeting). It might be better to do some small changes to remove these orphaned section titles. This is definitely for editors' discretion. > > In my notes, I also have some minor editing comments but I am sure others will raise them in the meeting :) > > Regards, > Yeliz. > > On 24 Feb 2012, at 17:29, Simon Harper wrote: > >> Hi Everyone, >> >> Also, please remember to feed the wiki: http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki >> All topics are welcome, the scope of this group is potentially unlimited! >> >> Please find the minutes for the teleconference on 22 February 2012: >> -<http://www.w3.org/2012/02/22-rd-minutes.html> >> >> The next teleconference is scheduled for Wednesday 29th Feb 2012 at: >> - 14:30-15:30 UTC / UK time (GMT) >> - 15:30-16:30 Central European Time (CET) >> - 09:30-10:30 US Eastern time (ET) >> - 22:30-23:30 Western Australia (WST) >> >> Please check the World Clock Meeting Planner to find out the precise time for your specific location: >> -<http://bit.ly/wjpcw9> >> The teleconference information is: (Passcode 7394 - "RDWG") >> * +1.617.761.6200 >> * SIP / VoIP - http://www.w3.org/2006/tools/wiki/Zakim-SIP >> >> We also use IRC to support the meeting: (http://irc.w3.org) >> * IRC server: irc.w3.org >> * port: 6665 >> * channel: #rd >> >> ================================ >> AGENDA: >> >> Chair: Harper_Simon >> >> Agenda+ Welcome& Logistics (Regrets, Agenda Requests, Comments) >> >> Agenda+ Pre-Call Release Discussion - http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki/Mobile_Pre_CFP >> >> Agenda+ W3C Note Editing >> >> Agenda+ Any Other Business >> >> ================================ >> >> >> Last weeks - and previous minutes can be found at: >> -<http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/minutes-history> >> >> Keep on-top of scribing at: >> -<http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/scribes> >> >> Links to Key Documents: >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/ >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/process >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/planning >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki >> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wai-rd/ >> >> >> Cheers >> >> -- >> Si. >> >> PS I check my email at 08:00 and 17:00 GMT. If you require a faster response please include the word 'fast' in the subject line. >> >> ======================= >> Simon Harper >> http://simon.harper.name/about/card/ >> >> University of Manchester (UK) >> Web Ergonomics Lab - Information Management Group >> http://wel.cs.manchester.ac.uk >> >> > >
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