[updated] call for papers

Hi folks,

Ref: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki/Draft_version_of_the_call_for_papers>

As discussed during the prvious call, I've taken a pass at rewriting the 
call for papers to address several comments. I've attached a Word file 
with comments to highlight some of the issues I tried to address and 
would be happy to further discuss these as needed.

Please feel free to make editorial fixes but please notify the list if 
you make more substantial changes. I'm still not very happy with the 
"objectives" section so any suggestions are welcome.

Regards,
   Shadi

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Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office
Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG)
Research and Development Working Group (RDWG)