- From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 14 Nov 2013 15:06:04 +0100
- To: Alistair Garrison <alistair.j.garrison@gmail.com>, Eval TF <public-wai-evaltf@w3.org>
Hi Alistair, On 14.11.2013 13:26, Alistair Garrison wrote: > Dear all, > > With regard to the update - good job! Thanks! Eric has been making most of the fixes to address the comments and I've been going over with to fine tune the text and its flow. > A couple of things... > > 1st paragraph in the Introduction - typo "evaluatos" Thanks, fixed. So much to fine-tuning... ;) > Also, under "scope of applicability" I would suggest changing the heading "Conformance Evaluation Procedure" to simply "The Evaluation Procedure" or "WCAG-EM Evaluation Procedure". Yes, I've been wondering about that too. Eric and I just didn't get to fine-tuning this section yet, though. Will look at it in the next round. Thanks, Shadi > All the best > > Alistair > > On 13 Nov 2013, at 15:19, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote: > >> Dear Eval TF, >> >> An updated Editor Draft of 11 November 2013 is available online: >> - http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/conformance/ED-methodology-20131111 >> >> >> Sections that are ready for review (send comments to the list): >> - Abstract >> - Introduction >> - Using This Methodology >> - Scope of Applicability >> >> >> A full diff of the changes since the 26 February Working Draft is here: >> - http://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2FWCAG-EM%2F&doc2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FWAI%2FER%2Fconformance%2FED-methodology-20131111 >> >> >> Note: Section "Evaluation Procedure" is not ready for discussion. >> >> >> We will discuss some of these changes during tomorrow's call. >> >> >> Regards, >> Shadi >> >> -- >> Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ >> Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office >> Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG) >> Research and Development Working Group (RDWG) >> >> >> >> >> >> >> > > -- Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG) Research and Development Working Group (RDWG)
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