- From: Christophe Strobbe <strobbe@hdm-stuttgart.de>
- Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 15:02:20 +0200
- To: "ERT WG" <public-wai-ert@w3.org>
Hi, Am Di, 25.06.2013, 16:08 schrieb Shadi Abou-Zahra: > Dear Group, > > The latest requirements document for review is here: > - http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/WD-AERT/ED-requirements Some comments that are strictly speaking editorial: * Objectives: 1: I would rephrase "their typical features" to "typical features of such tools"; we don't want "their" to refer back to "developers" ;-) * Under "Types of tools": "Industrial/commercial and open source tools, which test" should be rephrased to "Industrial/commercial and open source tools that test" (without the "German comma"!), because the current punctuation assumes that all tools test websites and applications. * Under "Types of tools": "Focused tools, which test" -> "Focused tools that ..." (same reason as previous comment). Best regards, Christophe > > Regards, > Shadi > > -- > Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ > Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office > Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG) > Research and Development Working Group (RDWG) > > > > -- Christophe Strobbe Akademischer Mitarbeiter Adaptive User Interfaces Research Group Hochschule der Medien Nobelstraße 10 70569 Stuttgart Tel. +49 711 8923 2749
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